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As Good as it Gets
I liked how to begin with it seemed like they were in a prison, and it only slowly became clear they were in a school, it was really nicely done.
The Device
This was pretty amusing. Too short, though!
Defining the Enemy
I really liked all the separate pieces but I think they weren't quite fitted together. The 5-minute cry only lasting 30 seconds, all the petty work stuff that can sometimes explode out of all proportion was great.
She Rides the Night
Lovely language and imagery in this, the way it flowed. It was very evocative and dramatic. And I agree it conjures up the feeling of heavy metal.
Training Days
Im guessing from the use of aether this might be another snippet for your book? It was great, I really enjoyed it. Some of the fighting did seem a bit monotonous.
Uba
This was great. Because I was really caught up in reading it, I didnt notice it was coming to an end and the ending took me by surprise, which I liked. It had a quick pace which made it an easy read, but maybe its all a bit hurried (wordcount was a problem, I see).
Flesh of Clay
Beautifully written. Maybe a little predicable, but possibly it only seems like that because you made the ending seem inevitable, which can be a good thing. An interesting journey through the evolution and predicament of creating AI.
Room with a View
This was great. Ive been playing a lot of Mass Effect recently and it did feel a lot like playing a computer game - which I think it was meant to. I thought you managed to explain what was going on pretty well, fitting it into the story unobtrusively.
Lucky
A very enjoyable story. How did he get out of the cell though?! The fireside conversation was really well depicted, and also I liked how Grayson had been shaped by the shadow.
The Pianist
Really great scene-setting, very evocative. Maybe a bit overdone/ clichéd, but in a way that contributed to the success of the shock violence. I did have to re-read a few sections where the action became a little muddy.