If anyone wants more fun ones SCP -2424 is a pretty good one. Took me a while to catch on to what it was about.
What was the origin of this one?
If anyone wants more fun ones SCP -2424 is a pretty good one. Took me a while to catch on to what it was about.
SCP is very cool, my dude. I love that site as it's one big community focused on creative writing of spookiness.
Where is "when day breaks"?
It seems to be gone, the links earlier in the thread are broken now and it's not on the list of entries anymore.
Shaggydredlocks (the author) apparently decided to self-delete it so they could do some rewriting.NoRéN;233028529 said:The fuck happened to When day Breaks?
I don't know how you improve on perfection but ok.Shaggydredlocks (the author) apparently decided to self-delete it so they could do some rewriting.
Here's an archived version.
I'd prefer seeing it submitted as a tale than rewritten in such a way that removes the unique aspects that make it so frightening.NoRéN;233029207 said:I don't know how you improve on perfection but ok.
Seriously, one of the few that actually understands horror.
I was thinking more like X-Files or Warehouse 13.
But considering how often people are killed by SCPs, an anthology series might be more fitting.
Shaggydredlocks (the author) apparently decided to self-delete it so they could do some rewriting.
Here's an archived version.
The tower SCP is really well-done. Loved the passage with the blind-deaf-mute woman.
If it doesn't make the cut it should be added as a normal SCP later.
Butit achieved it's purpose. But, I do see the flaws. Still, a story to d pending heavily on [redacted] should b praised. This story was excellent c predict to most of the other attempts.I'd prefer seeing it submitted as a tale than rewritten in such a way that removes the unique aspects that make it so frightening.
Seriously, that fucking ending.
Who was the oily hand guy in When Day Breaks?
Who was the oily hand guy in When Day Breaks?
gotta reread it but sounded like the author was trying to evoke 106 with the description
Deadline's past and it's not there.Did "when day breaks" ever get reposted?
NoRéN;233710897 said:Deadline's past and it's not there.
Damn, I just missed out on reading it. Maybe he will repost as just another scp entry.
I've read nursery, none orchard, tower, and the light that died. Anyone have any recommendations for others? Tower was amazing. Bone orchard was pretty great at times as well but needed less detail in some places and more details in others.
Toxi up top has a link to an archived version.Damn, I just missed out on reading it. Maybe he will repost as just another scp entry.
I've read nursery, none orchard, tower, and the light that died. Anyone have any recommendations for others? Tower was amazing. Bone orchard was pretty great at times as well but needed less detail in some places and more details in others.
NoRéN;233761015 said:Toxi up top has a link to an archived version.
Seems like you dislike needless detail and fluff so let me see if I can recommend some good stuff off this contest.
The rain was good, not tower level but good.
Person of interest is one of my favorites.
Red reality is a bit long but good.
Most definitely.Thanks! I'll read those. Yeah it isn't details that I dislike but the details need to matter. Some authors seem to like to over stuff their entries.
The contest is over. The winner is Anantashesha. http://www.scp-wiki.net/scp-3000
Also, When Day Breaks is now an 001 proposal. http://www.scp-wiki.net/shaggydredlocks-proposal
Also, When Day Breaks is now an 001 proposal. http://www.scp-wiki.net/shaggydredlocks-proposal
I really, really don't like When Day Breaks. It's just a short story that doesn't bother to follow the SCP formats at all. I don't understand the appeal.
It's a fun read, but yeah, it really doesn't and seems to be a scenario in which everything ends already as opposed how the SCP style is all about what's underneath our current world and the horror it hides from the normal world that makes it all work so well.
Unless I'm missing something and it's supposed to be an alternate reality.
It's fucking scary.I really, really don't like When Day Breaks. It's just a short story that doesn't bother to follow the SCP formats at all. I don't understand the appeal.
The author for When Day Breaks removed it from the contest so they could edit it. It was reposted as a SCP-001 proposal, which is pretty damn nice.The winner is.... Not what I expected :/
I understood it but it just didn't fulfill that need of scariness, creepiness, etc. It's a decent way to look at human life, sure, but it didn't do it for me honestly.
When Day Breaks was a better entry imo.
Not in the slightest.It's fucking scary.
Like really fucking scary.
The author for When Day Breaks removed it from the contest so they could edit it. It was reposted as a SCP-001 proposal, which is pretty damn nice.
093 is my favorite SCP, so that's a pretty high bar to clear.
Attempts to Assassinate Thought didn't grip me at all. Don't know why, I usually like those sorts of apocalyptic stories.I agree about some of the prose, but I still liked When Day Breaks the best out of all the entries. When compared to some other 001 proposals, it doesn't break the format that hard. 3519 and 093 are of course fantastic as well.
The entry I really didn't like is Red Reality. I wasn't a fan of the language in that one. Attempts to Assassinate Thought and Tower were my other favorites.
When Day Breaks is some Junji Ito shit. I liked it.