I had my doubts. Thinking back to the old Undeadburg streams with Jeff trying to fight the Taurus Demon, I couldn't imagine him ever making it as far as he did.
That old Jeff has died, and he has been gloriously reborn. Something seems to have *clicked* for him in the last couple streams.
He's been blocking, managing stamina, his attack timing has improved, and I never thought he'd successful start rolling, but he has. I haven't had those 'aha!' moments for myself since first playing Demon's Souls, so it's cool to see a new player picking up the mechanics of the game.
As for tips and advice, I would second the suggestion to upgrade armor, if just to +1 or 2 even.
Souls come and go so it's definitely better to put them into something when you have them. Now that you've improved your weapon, Jeff, there's no good reason not to do the same to your armor, using Titanite Shards, and even your shield to increase stability. You may have to kill a few trees real quick, but it's worth it.
*NOTE*
Using Titanite Shards to upgrade a weapon to +5 is fine, or to upgrade some armor or shield to +3, BUT watch out for upgrades that use Large Titanite Shards. These are a rarer item you can't simply purchase in the early game, so you should spend them more wisely on weapons or armor you feel particularly attached to.
The small upgrades cost nothing but souls, really, so you need not worry about it. Upgrade what you have. Again, just don't use the Large Shards without more serious consideration (and you may only have 1 or 2 at this point).
One more thing!
When you're looking through your equipment, if you press X on the Xbox Controller, it will show you a screen comparing that piece of equipment to what you currently have equipped. Blue means an improved stat, Red means a decrease in that stat. It even compares item weight. If you Press X yet again, you should see a screen with a description of the item. So yeah, X shows you more information about items/equipment. Take a look, won't you.
Ah, and don't forget to kindle the bonfire near the Garden, if you haven't already!